The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/13
What a beautiful story, I loved it. Powerful strong and will touch the hearts of many.

God bless~
11/30/13
Great story. I am not ashamed to say that it brought a tear to my eye (okay...I am ashamed - little bit). So many times we jump to conclusions because we don't know the whole story. So many do that with Jesus too, so we've got to share the whole story, but a wise man once said "They don't care how much you know, until they know how much you care."

Bess showed how much she cared, and that love is what opens the door for Christ.

You did such an excellent job with this story.

Thanks!
11/30/13
Great story. I am not ashamed to say that it brought a tear to my eye (okay...I am ashamed - little bit). So many times we jump to conclusions because we don't know the whole story. So many do that with Jesus too, so we've got to share the whole story, but a wise man once said "They don't care how much you know, until they know how much you care."

Bess showed how much she cared, and that love is what opens the door for Christ.

You did such an excellent job with this story.

Thanks!
12/05/13
Congrats! God bless~
12/06/13
Congratulations on your EC place for this lovely, moving story so very well told. Well done!
12/15/13
I really enjoyed the way you crafted this story. It was entertaining with a lovely message. Well done!