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11/29/13
This was disconcerting, as I am sure you meant for it to be. While there are certainly situations like this, I am not so sure that "legitimate" and legal abortion clinics are much better. Why else have they fought legislation that requires them to inform patients of the truth about the fetus being aborted?

I am not sure if it was intentional, or if you just didn't have time to delve further, but I noted that when your MC became outraged it was over the deceit done to her, and while you mention the guilt, there is that dark thought that if everything had gone smoothly, as promised, there would have been no guilt. It is very human to fool ourselves into believing what we want to believe, isn't it?

Very well written, very dramatic and very chilling.
11/30/13
A very well written description of a very sad situation in our world today.
12/02/13
Powerfully executed and very unsettling. The mere "sound of abortion" rips to the core. You've managed to put together a profound commentary of the repercussions of taking a "life" along with the "morally conscious" thoughts that linger linger long after.

Excellent writing.

God bless~