The Official Writing Challenge
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In this beautifully written story, the ancient is blended with the modern, making us think--what if John the Baptist were here today? I love the message of salvation and the example of one family who accepted it. So sad, the continuing situation of "almost persuaded" as demonstrated by the narrator.
11/24/13
You've managed to create a piece that provides a multi-layered piece that not only is reflective but powerful in meaning.

Nicely done.

God bless~
11/25/13
This is so wonderfully descriptive that I felt I was there! Beautiful writing, very powerful and a challengingly serious last paragraph. A really great piece.