The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent work here, with a clear ring of authenticity. The title introduces us to a range of characters, drama and tension, with a beautiful close that bursts a balloon-shaped ego.
Oh wow, Camille what a bomb Lena dropped! I would have given a pretty penny to be there that day! My mouth is hanging wide open still.

Great writing, great story, and now I am laughing out loud. Lena the Tiny Giant for sure! Excellent!
Yippee! I loved this article, and a true story to boot; it doesn't get any better than that for me! On the technical side of things, your first commenter said it better than I could, so I'll just add my agreement to his comments. I really didn't see this ending coming, but the suspense built in such a way that about anything might have been the finish...well, anything other than what really happened. I totally didn't see that coming. Nice job on this uplifting story.
Congratulations, Camille!

Wing His Words
Congratulation dear, on your well deserved EC!.Lena the Tiny Giant was outstanding writing and one of the best stories I've read in a long time!
Oh how I love this story. It has absolutely everything to keep this reader riveted. I felt that I knew Lena personally through your excellent portrayal of her character, and I was so pleased when she took that uncaring, hard hearted Carol down a peg or two. Congratulations on a well deserved EC placing.
Congratulations on your EC!

Thanks for sharing this lovely story of your experience. God bless.
Congratulations on your EC. It's EC 2 C Y it r8ed so well.
Congratulations on your 6th place EC. Your story is touching, engaging and has a satisfying end (someone getting her comeupance!). The fact that it's a true story makes it even better. Well told.
I just loved how you were able to use your true and poignant memories to create a wonderful entry.
Thank you for sharing these characters with us.