The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/13
This was an excellent read. I loved it from the first to last word. well done.

God bless~
The missionaries went forth never needing to raise funds for a building.

Will America ever see a time when "home churches" reign supplying funds for more missionaries.

One preached, one watered but God gave the increase.
11/26/13
Captivating. i've seen those kind of kids in Uganda and I've seen the power of love at work in their lives. I rarely think of God as the horse we get our message from. New thought.
11/29/13
Congrats! God bless~
11/29/13
Congratulations on your EC. Your story is really touching and rings true even though it's fictional. Very well written.
11/30/13
A lovely, tender story written from the heart. Congratulations on your EC win.
12/04/13
Fiction yes but an unfortunate reality all over the world. I appreciate how you captured the essence of loving perseverance in your story which we can appropriate in our own efforts.