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11/24/13
Your entertaining assembly of characters here were delightful. I love the verse you quoted from Revelation. I'm looking forward to seeing something like you describe with the wolf and the lamb. What a day that will be!
It seems a well thought out story, although it may have just quickly come to you.

The ending "of the dream" was a nice conclusion.

When I hear birds early in the morning, I say they are thanking God for the new day and the food he will provide.

When I hear birds late in the evening at nesting time, I say they are thanking God for the day and the food he provided.

Nice story. We should be just as thankful.
11/24/13
Creative, enjoyable, well written, and completely on topic. That is a favorite verse of mine in revelation.

Clever and well done.

God bless~
11/29/13
Congrats! God bless~
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