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Your entertaining assembly of characters here were delightful. I love the verse you quoted from Revelation. I'm looking forward to seeing something like you describe with the wolf and the lamb. What a day that will be!
It seems a well thought out story, although it may have just quickly come to you.

The ending "of the dream" was a nice conclusion.

When I hear birds early in the morning, I say they are thanking God for the new day and the food he will provide.

When I hear birds late in the evening at nesting time, I say they are thanking God for the day and the food he provided.

Nice story. We should be just as thankful.
Creative, enjoyable, well written, and completely on topic. That is a favorite verse of mine in revelation.

Clever and well done.

God bless~
Congrats! God bless~
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