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What a clever approach to the topic, and a perfect segue culminating into a powerful ending. Great job!

God Bless~
Amongst all the rainbow colours ... the black and white of truth. Well done.
That is a fantastic opening paragraph. You wrote it wonderfully.
An interesting and well thought out article. Good twist to liken us to to the fish. Thanks!
Loved this devotional! I like how you enjoyed the beauty of this fish before you found out it's true inward colors.

I wonder how many movie stars we would actually like if we knew who they really are?

Wonderful write! Blessings, LaVonne
Oh yes, I definitely come down on the side of the goldfish. A beautifully written and descriptive entry and a fresh approach to the topic. Great job!
Congratulations on ranking 19 overall!