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11/14/13
well done tale of despair transformed into hope. Your beginning and middle had my heart headed down the sad hill over the painful lives led by so many today. Then, with a stranger's smile at the precious young woman, my pain turned into joy. I could hardly wait to see what God and the love of His people would do for this dear soul. This could be a really touching book. Thanks for sharing.
11/15/13
You've crafted a very clever raw emotional piece. The significant contrast betweent the "well to do" attorney versus her "client" was brilliant, and oft times so true.

I liked the way it ended, smooth and upbeat with hope hovering nearby.

Nicely done!

God bless~
What a wonderful story with filled with contrasts.I love how slanted it with hope and love. God bless!
Congratulations on ranking 14 overall!