The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/13
I enjoyed this deep and introspective poem.

God Bless~
11/09/13
I enjoyed your poem of two perspectives, the positive and optimistic, and the negative and pessimistic. It alludes well to what might never have been achieved if optimism didn't win out - eg the moon landing. Well written.
Congratulations on ranking 24 overall!