The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/05
The melodramtic title made me click on this to read. I especially loved the first and third verses.
11/22/05
I wonder if you are comparing winter to death-as in the hunter with no gender. Thank you for sharing your heart. Well said--God bless ya, littlelight
11/22/05
Wow! This poem has a lot of meat that needs to be chewed on over time. So much meaning in 7 stanzas! My favorite stanzas were 3, 5, and 7, and especially the line "a rush of magical hugs to relieve us from the gush of grief."