The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/13
This is lovely. Well done creating such a beautiful story.
11/07/13
Awww. How touching and moving! I loved your story, it was tender and provided a vital message too!

God bless~
Oh I love this. I think it's perfect. Sometimes Daddies do work too hard and I'm so glad this dad got the message in time. This was a fun, creative take on the topic and something I could have seen my own daughter doing.
Perfect.

A real life story with a perfect ending.

Don't we wish we would have been that Dad at times.

Good example for present-day parents of young children and nicely written.