The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/13
Great job! This was an entertaining and delight to read. Well done.

God bless~
The title caught my attention and the story kept me reading. I liked the setting and the viewpoint you presented. It read a little choppy in places, and very smooth in others. Over all, it was an enjoyable read.
Nice story within a story. The Bible leaves much to our imagination.

well written with everyday imagination. The wife is left to her own thoughts.

Bible stories come to life when we can fill in some probable conversations.
11/14/13
A delightful read. Congratulations on your win.
11/14/13
Congratulations!

God bless~
11/17/13
Sweet and sassy tale telling and
a very enjoyable read. Congratulations on your level win!
Eloquently written. This piece speaks volumes about the capabilities and experience you have as a writer.