The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow - powerful story. It was frustrating to read, but so often this kind of scenario occurs in court rooms.
Great writing.

God bless
Powerful, disturbing, but great writing and unique for the topic.
This is a very well done true story that brings tears to my eyes and anger to my heart. Powerful and sad. You did an excellent job of bringing it all to the pages of life. Thanks for sharing a slice of your life.
Heartbreaking. Not a unique occurence. What animal preys on man? Man. Infuriating, while written excellently.
very riveting story. I hope justice was served.
Tough situation indeed. The ending was a little bit of a let down after such a strong middle. But really, really good writing.
Congratulations on placing 24 overall!