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10/31/13
This was a reflective piece that held my attention. I liked the way you wrapped the story up. It leaves it to the imagination of the reader. I'd like to believe she did go to church and welcomed Jesus into her life.

Nicely done.

God bless~
10/31/13
This was a reflective piece that held my attention. I liked the way you wrapped the story up. It leaves it to the imagination of the reader. I'd like to believe she did go to church and welcomed Jesus into her life.

Nicely done.

God bless~
10/31/13
Oh those reunions--usually the older you get the more fun they are. I was feeling anxious for your MC and could relate to her in many ways. So glad for the honesty of the 'popular' girl and how that helped Maggie fit in and enjoy the event. Good title for this reflective story.
nice story. love the fact that she saw the present and past from a new perspective.
Congratulations on placing 9th in your level and 15 overall! (the highest rankings can be found on the message boards)