The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/13
Oh, such a beautiful story from your past. I can imagine Robert Young on Father Knows Best doing the deed of love for his little "Princess." This should earn you a ribbon!
Wing His Words
10/31/13
Yippee for Dad! (Although, to be completely honest, I do love to eat fish, but maybe not this one day.) Your article lived the detail, exploding the scene in my mind and drawing my heart towards the finish with the suspense a writer tries to inject into a short piece. You hooked me every bit as much as your dad hooked that fish. I could hardly wait to read the end, and found it a satisfying finish to a terrific tale. I'm so glad that it's true. Great job!
11/01/13
Whoa, were you ever blessed to have such a father! This story is so touching and the fact that its true makes it even more heartwarming. Most dads would have gone ahead and finished the fish off and had him for supper.

Superbly written, and a sure fire contender in the challenge. Thanks so much for sharing this tender slice of life. Blessings, my friend.
Great story. I'm glad it's true also. Very suspenseful.