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This was an excellent story that truly made me feel for the MC. Sometimes when visitors come to our church, more than not they don't even own a, I can understand how this person was feeling.

Good job with the topic and very well written. If this is a true story, I hope the MC will give it another try, or find another church that'll make them feel comfortable in His word.

God bless~
This story is so true (and convicting). We that have grown up in the church don't really know how a new-comer feels.
The word Bible should be capitalized to show that it is not an ordinary book - giving honor to God.
I was hoping for a different ending, but yours made the point of the story even sharper.
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