The Official Writing Challenge
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11/04/13
My heart goes out to Ben. I often felt the same way in school, especially being bullied. Connecting to "one or two" special friends is sometimes more significant than an abundance of superficial friends.

This was well written and tugged on my heart...beautiful and on topic.

Loved it. God bless~
11/05/13
Very nice story that tugs at our heart strings for Little Ben. But then a good message too, that many times what makes us strange to others, is the thing God has given us for a very special purpose.

I had just a bit of trouble getting "into" the story, as it felt a little too much like someone just commentating, keeping us on the outside looking in. However, the subject material is very good and pertinent.

Keep up the good work!