The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/13
This lovely fun poem made me smile! - I enjoyed the rhymes, the scanning and the humour! Only goes to prove the ruling power of our pets!
10/26/13
This sounds like a true story. :) I can see this little "apricot" (love that description by the way), and her being queen and you her humble subjects. There is sweetness here from beginning to end (except the part where she bit the pastor's son...that hurt just a bit)and charm woven throughout. J'adore this! :)
10/27/13
Awww...I loved this!

God bless~
10/31/13
What a charming poem. I think I would like to meet your lovely apricot, at a distance of course. Congratulations on your EC placing.
10/31/13
congratulations! God Bless~
11/07/13
Hehe- we have a couple of 'ferocious' terrier pups, so I can relate to your charming poem.