The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/13
Awww. What a powerful tale! Excellent writing that had just the right amount of levity, mixed with poignancy for the fantastic meaningful climax. My kind of story.

I loved it!

God bless~

10/28/13
Great characterization and interior monologue - and a wonderful fit to the topic. Thanks!
10/30/13
I absolutely loved this story! I sat on the edge of my seat, trying to anticipate just how you'd finish this tale. Full of all sorts of good stuff...character development, good imagery, suspense,and just a terrific read. Thanks.
10/31/13
Congrats on your H.C. and E.C.! I love it when the judges and I agree on a great article; it means I'm learning to recognize good writing, which can only make mine better. Go ahead have a bit of chocolate to celebrate. In fact, I think I'll jjoin you.
10/31/13
Great story, powerfully written. Congratulations on your win.
10/31/13
Pam,

No surprise here.
Congratulations!

God bless~
A fun read with a delightful ending. Congratulations on your well deserved EC.
11/02/13
Congratulations, friend! Great read and well deserved EC.
11/07/13
I thought it was interesting that your MC acquired the nickname of his nemesis.
Great story about how youthful influence shapes our character.