The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/13
I really enjoyed this sweet story and liked the twist of the cat being 'chilled' by curiosity. Very well told.
Loved the title and the delightful story. I think "perimeter" would work better than "parameter",which gave me a minor reading bobble. Even so, an enjoyable, and well written read.
10/21/13
I LOVED this! Such a sweet and poignant read at once.

Cute twist on the wording.

God bless~
10/24/13
Congratulations! God bless~
10/24/13
A delightful story, Vicki, and well written. Congratulations and God bless!
10/24/13
Congratulations on taking 3rd place with this sweet story. I miss those old stores that I frequented in my youth--I am not a fan of mega malls and the impersonal service they're noted for. Thanks for the memories.
10/25/13
Great job drawing the reader into your characters' lives. Congratulations!
10/31/13
I just adored your poignant story. Thank you for giving me a case of the 'warm fuzzies.'
Congratulations on your well deserved EC placing with this engrossing tale.