The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/05
My eyes are filled with tears. This is lovely, sweet...wonderful! Great job.
11/16/05
Very nice. I kind of wish the ending was longer but I felt you made the older woman so real:) I was glad to see she didn't give up trying.
11/17/05
Lovely story, leaving us to hope for her daughter's salvation made for a realistic ending. (BTW my mum was saved in her twighlight years when Jesus visited her late one night!)
11/17/05
For us all to have such a heart to share the gospel with our loved ones. I was praying right along side Mamie!
11/17/05
Family is always the hardest when it comes to witness....but Mamie didn't give up. Her faith is an example to me.

PTL!
11/18/05
Beautifully told story that kept my interest the whole way. A creative and enjoyable take on the topic. Well done.
11/18/05
oh wow - powerful!
11/19/05
A bittersweet story - very emotional, but with a feeling of hope at the end. There are a couple of spots where you could tighten your POV, but overall, this is well-done.
11/23/05
So touching....... Just beautiful. And couldn't we all identify with her daughter who was so grief stricken.