The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/13
Very clever piece, with a powerful close. Nicely done!

God bless~
10/21/13
Very nice play on words there for the topic to come through. I like the little details you had sprinkled throughout here, especially how she made her coffee and ate wholewheat toast. Very fun!

Just a note--I think you meant a "sliver" of a slice of toast, not a "slither" like a snake.

Very nicely done. Thanks for sharing!
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