The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/13
Great job with the topic, and great job of writing and delivering the content so cleverly.

Although it is a "work of fiction" as you so clearly note...the ending is indeed "truth" in that we can get more and more each time we read the BIBLE. I know I do!

Good job.

God bless~
10/21/13
I like Davey and Grandpa Josiah, very fun characters. I could see this as a children's story, to help them understand the value of truth and the Bible. Very nicely done-thanks for sharing!
10/24/13
Congratulations! God bless~
10/24/13
Love this story and the powerful message within. Congratulations!
Congratulations on placing 3rd in your level and 14 overall! (the highest rankings can be found on the message board)