The Official Writing Challenge
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A clever and thought-provoking entry that closes with an honesty that is so reassuring. Well done.
I enjoyed your poem. I like the way you show that seeing God's plans may not be the best thing and that your 'improvements' to his plans may not be so good. An interesting take on the topic and well written.
Beautiful...I love the last line. So true.

God bless~
This is wonderful. I've often said that God's greatest gift to man is not letting us know what the future holds. You showed that expertly in this piece.
Congratulations on placing 18 overall! Happy Dance!