The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/13
I was hooked from the start. The character of the young, aspiring author came through so authentically and I could just picture the two young girls engrossed in their "mystery". Loved it. Great writing.
10/19/13
This is extremely well written, in the voice of the young girl, Annie. I was thoroughly engaged and thought it rang true to the behaviour and imagination of girls of that age. Very well done!
10/21/13
Fantastic writing along with an authentic voice to the young MC. Excellent job and writing.

God bless~
Congratulations on placing 13 overall!
10/27/13
Ah, these two and their mystery charmed my heart! You did a super job with their story and the ending was spectacular. Love this!