The Official Writing Challenge
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I was hooked from the start. The character of the young, aspiring author came through so authentically and I could just picture the two young girls engrossed in their "mystery". Loved it. Great writing.
This is extremely well written, in the voice of the young girl, Annie. I was thoroughly engaged and thought it rang true to the behaviour and imagination of girls of that age. Very well done!
Fantastic writing along with an authentic voice to the young MC. Excellent job and writing.

God bless~
Congratulations on placing 13 overall!
Ah, these two and their mystery charmed my heart! You did a super job with their story and the ending was spectacular. Love this!