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10/21/13
Good opening paragraph that leads us smoothly into your story, finally ending with a powerful close. This was smooth and transitioned well.
Thank you, I enjoyed it.

God bless~
10/21/13
I had never heard the phrase "Care killed the cat." That's interesting. I agree with you, that worry is unnecessary and wrong - and will do nothing but give us headaches.
Keep writing.
This is a great devotion. I can totally relate. I often say if worrying were an Olympic sport, then I'd take home the gold. There is a good reminder in this piece. As a parent, we need to remember God loves them more than we can imagine. That's a lot. It's not easy to hand our cares over, but oh what a relief. Nice job.