The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/13
Powerfully done. Unique and expressively different.

Great job.

God bless~
10/10/13
The progression of the MC's life takes the reader on a journey of raw emotions that end in triumph. Liked the way you used children's games and old songs to support the mood of this piece. Well done.
Wow! When I first started reading this I thought it was going to be a jolly poem. The mood change saddened me, but glad to find the hopeful ending. Interesting use of nursery rhymes, very creative.
Wow what a powerful piece. I really like how you wove the lullabies and nursery rhymes into this piece. Great take on the topic and original and fresh. Congratulations on ranking 19th overall!