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10/10/13
This was well-written. I enjoyed reading this version concerning Judas.

Nicely done.

God bless~
10/10/13
Interesting picture of the betrayer, Judas. I like how you brought the scene to life as Jesus spoke to the crowd. This held my interest from start to finish--good job.
10/11/13
You set the scene well, from the outside, before you started taking us into
Judas' mindset little by little. A well-constructed build-up to a sad end.
10/12/13
You've done a great job in telling things from Judas' point of view and painting him as the 'black sheep'. May I suggest that if you had finished it before Judas' death it would have rung a little truer - so he was telling it before he took his own life. But, great work!