The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/13
Oh I just adored this beautiful poem. It flowed like silk, and it radiated warmth and truth. I simply love it...thank you!

God bless~
10/12/13
Great poem! I like the way you made 'Baa baa' the MC who needed salvation. Very creative and with good flow of rhythm and rhyme.
10/14/13
A good poem with some creative rhymes such as "presence and "essence".
10/15/13
I like this very much, it made me smile - I sure needed one!
10/16/13
Outstanding prose - I just love how you portrayed our gentle Shepherd.

You make my heart happy.