The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/13
Oh this was such a good story. You certaily know how to keep your readers interested. I liked the dialogue, the descriptions and the story overall.

Cute ending...very clever.

God bless~
10/14/13
Surely this is the introduction to a book; I was enthralled. You have created a great word picture. Your readers will beg for more....
Wing His Words
Certainly an entertaining read, with believable characters and scenery. Well done.
10/14/13
Loved the storyline and the characters. Well written and a very interesting read. Thanks for sharing.
I am panting for more! This is so entertaining and filled with promise . . .
10/18/13
Terrific job! Like all the others commenting, I long to read more! Keep writing, and hopefully, this is part of a book we can all anticipate seeing on the shelves.