The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh this was such a good story. You certaily know how to keep your readers interested. I liked the dialogue, the descriptions and the story overall.

Cute ending...very clever.

God bless~
Surely this is the introduction to a book; I was enthralled. You have created a great word picture. Your readers will beg for more....
Wing His Words
Certainly an entertaining read, with believable characters and scenery. Well done.
Loved the storyline and the characters. Well written and a very interesting read. Thanks for sharing.
I am panting for more! This is so entertaining and filled with promise . . .
Terrific job! Like all the others commenting, I long to read more! Keep writing, and hopefully, this is part of a book we can all anticipate seeing on the shelves.