The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/05
Wonderful adaptation.
Is this who I think it is?
Nice work :)
11/15/05
I feel like singing Christmas carols all of a sudden! This was lovely. The description of a the baby in his mother's arm's and nursing was truly "beautiful."
11/16/05
Tender and lovely. "The newborn Messiah, savior of the world, cuddled, sleeping in earthly arms." That must be the most beautiful sight this earth has ever seen. Well done.
Such a beautiful event - incomprehensible!!

Good story for this topic. I wouldn't have thought of it, but "beauty" is a great perspective to have with Christmas just around the corner. :-)
Beautiful Maxx. This also must be aprt of the project. Like I said in the previous story, you told it like you were there. That's an extrememly rare and remarkable gift. (I'm thinking your entries were lost during the judging.) I counted over ten referances dealing with light. Not sure if that was intential or not, but it added some depth to this incredible account. Jesus, "the light of world," you brought that concept, that name of His throughout this piece. And you did it without being cliche! YEAH!!! This is truly beautiful. I would love to read your final works on this Christmas story.