The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/13
This had a very potent message attached, patience, and adversity leads to God's deliverance. I really liked this story, I was a little confused as to why the MC couldn't call her mom. Other than that, I thought this story was powerful and can apply to just about anyone who has faced a "boss" with too much power.

Good job.

God bless~
10/15/13
Yes, I wondered, at first, why there could be no telephone contact. I found your story interesting and I was hoping for a turn around which came. Good story, and I got to thinking a letter could be better for breaking the ice after a shameful period to her life that had caused her to withdraw..