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09/19/13
I really enjoyed this, though I did begin to suspect early on that she might be pregnant. But my suspicions took nothing from the story, for I was delighted that her exam pointed to new life, instead of something dreadful. I loved how her concern swiftly changed from dwelling on party details to the joy only a new baby can bring! I love stories with happy endings and this one certainly had that! Great job!
09/21/13
That was fun. Well written. I too suspected pregnancy but enjoyed waiting to find out her response.
10/02/13
I loved this. I admit I knew the diagnosis right away, but I used to be a maternity nurse. You did a wonderful job of building the character and making me feel like I was right there in the room. Nicely done. Congratulations on ranking 12 overall!