The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/13
Beautiful descriptions, great word choices,interesting subject and on topic.

One of favs so far. Good job.
09/24/13
Beautiful descriptions and a unique take on the topic. I really enjoyed it - and it left me wondering what she wrote!
09/26/13
All I can say is CONGRATS AND WOW! 1st place level three and 1st place EC!
09/26/13
Congratulations Mike, so happy for your well deserved level and EC wins!!
09/26/13
Congratulations! God bless~
09/26/13
Congratulations,Mike! This story is heart-wrenching. I love your ending . . .forcing the reader to think how they might answer the dilemma.
09/26/13
Very descriptive work that sets the scene externally and internally. Your writing is really taking off. Congatulations on your placings. Well-deserved.
09/26/13
Do I know a winner when I see one or what? Told ya you had genius.Maybe I should give up writing and become a talent scout for writers!Haaaaa
09/26/13
Congrats Mike. Well deserved. My favorite among many really good entries.
09/27/13
Congratulations on your win!!
09/28/13
I love how you showed her love for each parent--this brought me into the story to feel how hard her decision would be. Your descriptions are poetic and the ending perfect to make us think. Congratulations on your well-deserved first place.
09/28/13
Your story was steeped in a depth and richness of description that had me savoring your words like I would a good creme brulee.
Supurb storytelling and congratulations on your 1st place EC win!
09/29/13
Congratulations on your placement, Mike. God bless!
09/29/13
Excellent story that drew me in. Congratulations on your first placing.
10/04/13
Congratulations on your wins with this deserving piece. The word pictures you painted made this story come alive. Part of me wanted you to not leave the reader hanging at the end--but it certainly was effective.
10/12/13
My grandparents had a willow tree, and my favorite place as a child was the "room" under it. Your amazing descriptions brought that memory to life and set the scene for this truly fabulous story. My heart is breaking for your MC. Congratulations on your 1st place EC!