The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/13
Hahahahahahahahahaha! I loved this! What a great well written tale that held my attention, even though I kind of suspected "the chubby fellow" was THE ONE she was looking for!

Nicely done. It was a hoot to read, and brought forth a very important message for all of us.

God bless~
09/12/13
This was fun and contained such an important lesson. Well done!
09/18/13
A powerful message in a delightful read! Good job!
09/19/13
Loved the suspense in the lesson that's been inflicted on your MC. Well-written, with self-deprecating warmth.
Congratulations for ranking 17th overall!