The Official Writing Challenge
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Welcome and congratulations on your leap to the Advanced level!

I love your testimony, so well written and so perfectly on topic . . .
You're words touched my heart and made it smile, and it blessed me to hear your testimony. Excellent job, and so well written and said.

Thank you. God Bless~
What a timely story! Many of us have experienced similar financial woes. I have a suggestion for your first sentence.
As it's written, it appears as if the breeze was walking to the mailbox. A participle phrase should always refer to next word that follows. Perhaps - "Walking to the mailbox, I could feel the breeze..." However, you wrote this sentence correctly: "Making it into the house, I..."

"I imagined in the clouds Jacobís ladder with angels going up and down." For less awkward construction, you might want to consider something like: "I imagined clouds with Jacob's ladder and angels...

I Loved the title! And I share in your prayer for the unemployed.
Thanks for the comments. I wrote this without going back over it, so any constructive help is appreciated!
Thank you for utilizing your testimony and this site as part of your entry. It touched and encouraged me. Write on!
Wow, so inspiring! It's a very easy read with a strong message. Your sadness had actually led you to a greater happiness. All your problems may not have been solved, but am sure your faith in God has grown. All the best and keep writing.
This is an encouraging entry and I'm glad you chose to share it with us. Keep writing and follow your dream. I hope your title, 'Expert-less' soon changes to 'Expert.'
Excellent article, and so encouraging to Faithwriters