The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/13
Phenomenal piece! Loved it.

Thank you and God Bless~
A wonderful romp for us geeks! I love this.
A wonderful romp for us geeks! I love this.
09/14/13
Apart from an inaccurate title, because your MC obviously has a very fertile brain, this was good fun read. Great work with a positive message.
09/15/13
I'm not an expert when it comes to poetry, but aside from what I think might be a missed beat or two, this poem is a "no-brainer" for creative originality, substance, message, and word-usage.

I would not be surprised to see this among the high raters. :-)
Some great word crafting here! I may not be a number and fact geek, but I am a geek in another way--I kept wanting to add more punctuation! I know writing poety allows more license in punctuation, but still...
Good job and I did enjoy the read.
09/17/13
Yes but it took quite a bit of my brain to keep up! Brilliant piece.
Wow! This is incredible. You did an outstanding job of taking me inside the mind of what I would guess a person with autism, yet it could be the thoughts in my head( with the exception of the brainy part) You speak volumes and show we all are quite similar no matter how different we feel. Outstanding writing and perception. This is brilliant and well deserved of an EC! Congratulations and Happy Dance!
09/19/13
Danielle this is fabulousówow, so powerful in its layered messages! So glad to see this in the winnerís circle, itís so deserving! Congratulations!
09/20/13
This made me sad, then happy, then convicted, then joyous. Yep, those are the best ingredients for a great read. Thank you!