The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/13
Oh my goodness! This poem was so touching and loving. My heart was blessed to read it. I got chills coursing up and down my spine. Powerful, reverent, and a beautiful tribute to our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ.

This is fabulous, it should be in a Christian magazine for the world to see!

I loved it. Thank you!

God bless~
Magnificent paeon of praise to Jesus. I love this!
09/15/13
A wonderful devotional, written from the heart and praising God all the way. A lovely poem for the topic.
09/15/13
Again, I confess I'm not an "expert" in writing poetry, so my comments are subject to challenges - pun intended.:-) I loved the message.I also loved how you repeated the theme in your first and last lines. I wondered about the "kings men." Did you mean king's men? And for such a lovely poem, I would consider a more creative title. Great job with rhyming.
09/17/13
You portrayed the ultimate Expert so lovingly in your prose. Very beautiful piece.
09/18/13
Well written, easy to read, good flow and great message.

Thanks.
09/18/13
A very nice poem. You open by telling us about an expert, you developed your poem with the various reasons why He is, and you closed with reminding us that He is indeed "The Expert."