The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/13
Captivating and compelling. Excellent job!

God bless~
09/14/13
Imagine being parents of the King. Beautifully crafted and thoughtful.
The first paragraph caught my attention immediatly. Your vivid description of the carpenter shop drew me in and I sensed the mood right away. The shift to second person in the next paragraph kind of threw me. Wonder if you should have kept first person through out?