The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the last line. It really pops, providing an excellent context and conclusion to your well crafted story.
09/06/13
An interesting tale of which I enjoyed reading from start to finish.

God bless~
09/07/13
Oh, I like this. Always be prepared and bring extra. :) I like the unique POV you chose for this story. It gave it a different "flavor."
09/07/13
Great "way it could have went down" story. And told well.

Thanks for sharing this.
09/08/13
Love the descriptive, totally credible treatment of this 'parallelable.' Great job.
09/08/13
My favorite kind of story is a well done Bible "retelling". You certainly did this one expertly!
09/09/13
I enjoyed your cleverly constructed telling of this parable. Your unique style never disappoints me.
Love it.
Congratulations for ranking 24 overall!