The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/13
I really enjoyed this entry, always love reference to biblical stories.

God bless~
So well written. I often find myself counting paces and so I identified, then was impressed your knowledge of the culture/reason for counting paces. I was also impressed with the shown desire to share Jesus.
09/08/13
Oh, this is great. I love it. Great use of the topic, too.
From the title to the conclusion,this well written story delivers a message not missed by thoughtful readers. Well done.
09/08/13
The most telling line in this wonderful story is the last one where they stopped counting paces! I enjoyed this very much.
09/09/13
Fabulous and interesting story about a relatively obscure instruction from Jesus. Well done!
09/09/13
Wonderful story. Just a tiny red ink. "with all the marching HE had done" instead of her.

Otherwise just a great read and write. Blessings.
09/09/13
Very well written. Thanks for sharing an interesting story.
09/09/13
Excellent! You did a wonderful job on this topic. Great writing.
Excellent. Kept my attention throughout. Love the way you phrase. The title is so fitting . . .
09/12/13
Congrats! God Bless~
This is beautiful! Thank you, and congratulations on your well-deserved win!
09/12/13
Congratulations! Such a beautifully, vividly, powerfully told story, so deserving of the win! Loved the perspective--felt like I was right there! Great job!
09/12/13
What a wonderful story. I enjoyed every bit. And what a great way to share the gospel. Congratulations on your win.
09/12/13
Love this, Melanie! Congratulations on your placement. God bless!