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09/07/13
Tears flowed from my eyes as I finished your article. Father God is so great and has never let me down. Living on a farm, I related to the wonderfulness of her second destination. Good job and good read!
09/09/13
Oh this was so touching! I loved every moment of this delightful and well written story. Thank you!

God Bless~
09/09/13
God does work in mysterious ways. This story is heartwarming and inspirational. God has a plan for us all. Very well done.
09/11/13
You crafted a wonderful story.
May I offer one bit of red ink?
Your second sentence was a bit awkward and threw me off.
I'm not sure if another comma is needed or a rearrangement of the adj.'s
Sweet story. Gripping! Love your vivid descriptions . . .