The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/13
I loved this piece. Realistic interaction and dialogue between to two gentlemen.

Cute ending with an important message. Nicely done.

God bless~
09/07/13
Authentic sounding dialogue and scenario for two experienced veterans. A fun piece.
09/09/13
I enjoyed this as both a good life lesson and an interesting exchange with the guys. Well written.
Congratulations for ranking 11th overall!