The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/13
Very intriguing! Your article grabbed my attention & held it right throughout to the end. I like the suspense.
09/05/13
I really enjoyed this entire tale. It was exciting and I couldn't wait to see how it would end!

Great job. Thank you.
God bless~
09/05/13
Very interesting, thought provoking and clever use of the topic. I enjoyed the web of intrigue you weaved and then came the satisfying conclusion.

Thanks for sharing
09/12/13
Congrats! God Bless~
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