The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/13
Wow - this was like a mini-movie! A lot of emotions and drama in this well written multi-layered piece. Nicely done.

God Bless~
09/07/13
Strong narrative and gripping dialogue. Nicely done.
Great dialog. Quite descriptive. Lots of emotion. Well done!
09/08/13
I loved your incredibly magnetic piece! My heart was pulled deeply into every line, just waiting to see what would happen. My only "complaint" is that it's too short; I want to read the rest of the book! Great job!
09/09/13
This is well written, lively, and interesting. Good entry!
09/11/13
Mercy me, honey chile'... I do declare you done done it good!
Congratulations for ranking 25 overall!