The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/13
The ending was such a surprise. I'm glad truth shines bright!
Great twist! The only thing that I would suggest is in the beginning when you mention the accounting assignment, if you can work "homework" in there as well, it would help cement the picture of the main character in my mind a little faster. I really enjoyed the story!
09/04/13
Amen...and truth prevails once again. Loved this and the unexpected ending!

God bless~
Wow this is a great story. The characters so real and natural. The conflict compelling and the message marvelous. Congratulations for ranking 7th your level and 12 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.)