The Official Writing Challenge
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09/01/13
You did a great job relating your story to a spiritual message--that is so true.
Wow! How well you describe the feelings of exposure and vulnerability known by all who have experienced such surgery; and how beautifully you carry the images into the realities of the spiritual life.
09/04/13
Powerful imagery and amazing detail. I loved it.
Thank you.

God bless~
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