The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/13
Love the ending especially - but the rest too. Great descriptions. You absolutely put me there.
09/04/13
Wow! Powerful story with amazing details that jumped from the page into the reader's mind. Excellent job, and super prolific ending.

God bless~
Wow! I can't even think of any other word. Wow! I had tears in my eyes. This is a masterpiece and my favorite this week. Congratulations for ranking 9th your level and 18th overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.)