The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/13
Fantastic job with this familiar Biblical encounter. You brought it to life in fresh way, her feelings and the scenario leapt off the pages.

I thought this powerful and moving.

God Bless~
09/01/13
I'm so glad that Jesus' love both reveals and heals. Your entry shows that. Good writing.
Most excellent! You really took us into their hearts. I love this . . .
09/04/13
This takes my breath away. An excellent piece of writing about the adulterous woman only wanting her father's and finding her Holy Father's love. Loved it.
Outstanding throughout. The only minor bobble for me was "can not", instead of the more frequently used "cannot." But, that is more a matter of preference, I think. Kudos on a well written piece.
09/05/13
Congrats on your HC! Very well done.....blessings.
09/05/13
Congratulations! God bless~
Congratulations for ranking 5th your level and 19th overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.)