The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/13
Fantastic job with this familiar Biblical encounter. You brought it to life in fresh way, her feelings and the scenario leapt off the pages.

I thought this powerful and moving.

God Bless~
09/01/13
I'm so glad that Jesus' love both reveals and heals. Your entry shows that. Good writing.
09/03/13
Most excellent! You really took us into their hearts. I love this . . .
09/04/13
This takes my breath away. An excellent piece of writing about the adulterous woman only wanting her father's and finding her Holy Father's love. Loved it.
09/04/13
Outstanding throughout. The only minor bobble for me was "can not", instead of the more frequently used "cannot." But, that is more a matter of preference, I think. Kudos on a well written piece.
09/05/13
Congrats on your HC! Very well done.....blessings.
09/05/13
Congratulations! God bless~
09/05/13
Congratulations for ranking 5th your level and 19th overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.)