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Beautiful...Working in the nursing home industry my whole life, I've heard and seen people "recognizing" a loved one just before expiring.

This was well done, and I could see the whole scene in my mind's eyed.

"Jesus" she said, as she began life again...

God bless~
Very powerful build-up to a fantastic close. You have set the scene and clearly drawn credible characters and dialogue along the way. Great work.
A very emotional story. I love your style of writing.
Well told story, thank you for sharing it.
This resonates with authenticity. Well done.
I thought your contrast between the suffering and assurance of Grace was described wonderfully.
This is beautiful. I remember when my grandmother was dying and I could feel my mom's spirit close by. Some may think God sent her for Grandma, but I think he sent her for me. When Mom died, Grandma and I filled that void for each other. It was hard to let her go because she was such a huge connection to Mom. Your story fills me with hope and I know things will be okay once more. Hugs